1 . 桃花江像一条银白色的绸带,穿过几座彩虹般的铁桥,弯弯曲曲地流向东方,江水在阳光的照耀下,闪动着点点波光。
2 . Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations。
3 . Weak: The team members are good players。
4 . Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire。
5 . Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape (转换为前置定语
6 . Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly past my desk
7 . 人的生活离不开友谊,但要得到真正的友谊却是不容易的。友谊需要用忠诚去播种,用热情去灌溉,用原则去培养,用谅解去护理。—————马克思
8 . ) Weak: Here are the books you ordered。
9 . 团结拼搏务实高效
10 . Weak: The organization has been supported by charity。
1 . 开拓创意,立足市场求发展;优质高效,用心服务为用户
2 . 在以here或there开头的句子中,把be动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如:
3 . Revision:Theteammembersplaywell
4 . 将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如:
5 . lempressment真诚热心
6 . 如果想飞得高就该把地平线忘掉。
7 . Revision: One workers plan eliminates tardiness
8 . 创意创业创辉煌
9 . 江水还没有封冻,只是水面上结了一层镜子般的薄冰,看去那薄冰至多只能负担一片树叶的重量。
10 . 全心全意传递祝福,尽职尽责开拓创意
1 . Weak: Here are the books you ordered。
2 . 这儿的两山垂直陡峭,山问又很狭窄,滚滚的江水来到这里,更加汹涌澎湃,好像千万辆坦克一齐开动,那声音仿佛打闷雷一般。
3 . 贵族化的品质大众话的生活
4 . Revision: The books you ordered have arrived。
5 . 网内存知己,天涯若比邻
6 . Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire
7 . 诚实守信灵活应变不屈不挠勇于创意
8 . ) Weak: One workers plan is the elimination of tardiness。
9 . Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire
10 . 留住那一刻永恒—中国电信
1 . 漓江的水可真名不虚传,清澈得像透明的水晶,一眼即可看到水中鱼儿游动的身影。
2 . 瞧,江水绿得迷人,人站在江畔,新换的淡色衣服也会抹上一层江水淡淡的绿影。
3 . Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate。
4 . Poor: She is a careful shopper。
5 . Better:Mysupervisorsaunteredpastmydesk
6 . Revision: The team members play well。
7 . Better: She compares prices and quality
8 . 江面上卷起了汹涌的波涛,发出“砰,砰”的响声,雪白的浪花,猛烈地扑打着泥褐色的堤岸。
9 . 以市场为导向以网络为基础以人才为根本以发展为前提
10 . Better: Charity has supported the organization。
1 . 惰的马路程远,吝啬的朋友远(蒙古)
2 . 团结敬业奉献创意
3 . 网络之巅,谁与争峰—中国宽带网
4 . Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations。
5 . 江水明洁如镜,清楚地倒映出那巍巍的山势,我的影子也清晰地映入水中。
6 . 物美价廉沟通无限
7 . 把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如:
8 . 它那诗情画意的江水,环绕着全城向西日夜不停地流淌着,它流去了父辈的烦恼,医好了家乡的创伤,给人们带来了欢乐,也带来了希望。
9 . 超越自我追求卓越
10 . Weak:Thereisnoopportunityforpromotion
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