1 . 兴尽晚回舟,误入藕花深处。——李清照《如梦令•常记溪亭日暮》
2 . 重视产品质量,加强企业管理!
3 . Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations。
4 . 塑企业形形象,创优良品牌!
5 . Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores。
6 . 满塘素红碧,风起玉珠落。
7 . Weak:Thereisnoopportunityforpromotion
8 . Weak: Here are the books you ordered
9 . 立志难也,不在胜人,在自胜。
10 . 品质,企业未来的决战场和永恒的主题。
1 . Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores。
2 . 以人为本,和谐共赢!
3 . ) Weak: Here are the books you ordered。
4 . Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations。
5 . 别浦,惯惊移莫定,应怯败荷疏雨。——朱彝尊《长亭怨慢•雁》
6 . 酒盏旋将荷叶当。——欧阳修《渔家傲•花底忽闻敲两桨》
7 . Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate。
8 . 【小池】杨万里
9 . 具有博大胸襟的人,才有可能在心灵上潇洒;具有自信和实力的人,才有可能在外表上的潇洒。
10 . 优质产品--走向世界的桥梁!
1 . 例如:
2 . 一枕新凉宜客梦,飞入藕花深处。——黄升《酹江月•夜凉》
3 . 【赏莲】
4 . 技术是基础,管理是保障。
5 . 夕阳倒影射疏林,江边一带芙蓉老。——陈霆《踏莎行•晚景》
6 . “不可能”这个字,只在愚人的字典中找得到。——拿破仑
7 . Better:Mysupervisorsaunteredpastmydesk
8 . Weak: The team members are good players
9 . Poor: She is a careful shopper。
10 . 先相信你自己,然后别人才会相信你我。——屠格涅夫
1 . Poor:Mysupervisorwentpastmydesk
2 . 藻国凄迷,麹澜澄映,怨入粉烟蓝雾。——吴文英《过秦楼•黄钟商芙蓉》
3 . Revision:Oneworkersplaneliminatestardiness
4 . Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation。
5 . 艇子几时同泛?待折荷花临鉴。——厉鹗《谒金门•七月既望湖上雨后作》
6 . Weak: The trees are bare The grass is brown The landscape seems drab
7 . Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate。
8 . Weak: One workers plan is the elimination of tardiness。
9 . Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation
10 . Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists。
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